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雅思写作之语言的多样化

  

  我们的小编为正在备考雅思的同学们整理了一些关于在写作中使用多样化语言的技巧。大家可以参考使用,希望对大家的写作有所帮助。

  (1) The goats grazed peacefully in the farm and were unaware of the

  approaching hunter. (并列分句)

  (2) Grazing peacefully, the goats in the farm were unaware of the approaching

  hunter. (现在分语短语+简单句)

  (3) In the farm, the goats grazed peacefully and were unaware of the

  approaching hunter. (副词短语+并列分句)

  (4) There were goats grazing peacefully in the farm, unaware of the

  approaching hunter. (简单句+形容语短语)

  (5) As the goats grazed peacefully in the farm, they were unaware of the

  approaching hunter. (原因副词从句+主句)

  (1)和(5)的句式最常见; 如果加上其他三种互相交替,句子不是更多样化吗?

  最后,看看这两个句子要如何多样化呢?

  (6) The young pilot was on his first overseas training.

  (7) He felt very uneasy.

  (a) The young pilot on his first overseas training felt very uneasy.

  (b) The young pilot felt very uneasy during his first overseas training.

  (c) The young pilot's first overseas training made him feel very uneasy.

  (d) Extreme uneasiness seized the young pilot on his first overseas training.

  (e) The young pilot was on his first overseas training, feeling very uneasy.

  (f) It being his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy.

  (g) Being on his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy.

  (h) The young pilot was on his first overseas training and felt very uneasy.

  (i) The young pilot, who was on his first overseas training, felt very uneasy.

  (j) When the young pilot was on his/first overseas training, he felt very uneasy.

  (k) As the young pilot was on his first overseas training, he felt very uneasy.

  (l) The young pilot was on his first overseas training, so that he felt very uneasy.

  在上述 12 个句子中,(a)‐(g)是简单句;(h)是并列句;(i)‐(l)是复杂句。简单句除(b)和(g)之外,其他五样,用的人并不多。人们最喜欢采用复杂句,尤其是(j)和(k)这两款;接着便是并列句(h)。如果大多数人的句子只限于(b),(g), (h), (j)和(k)这五种,而其他的则弃如敝屣,不是很可惜吗?


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