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托福写作十大典型失败案例分析(三)

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典型失败案例八:意思重复,原地踏步

 

Topic-Your opinion on DINK families

  

My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society

    

典型失败案例九:中国俗语胡乱翻译

 

Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?

  

I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: Many sons, many lucks”……

  

正确说法:Happiness lies in having many children

  

Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?

  

We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: Know is know, dont know is dont know”……

  

Topic 3- Do you think ones character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

 

Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rats son can make hole……

 

Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

 

I believe one sentence:A good person is all life safe. We Chinese people always say: Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”。

 

典型失败案例十:废话连篇不知所云

 

Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?

 

This topic is very interesting. Im very interested in talking about this topic. Because Im also a college student and Im not married……

 

解决方法:

 

In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married

 

Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information?

 

Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life

 

Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection

 

Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isnt it? Of course! Its really very very important!

 


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